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A captive heart's tale.

By
Real Estate Broker/Owner with ADT Real Estate

 Deep down, in the midst of an overwhelming forest of dark shadows and tangled dreams, a heart is held captive. Held in a prison of it's own making, with fear, worry and guilt as it's guards, this heart weeps and struggles in it's bonds. The guards are like huge weeds, with strong limbs covered with thorny branches and bitter roots grown deep in the rich soil of lies believed. Memories of it's former glory still resonate from within, but a life of indulgance has dulled it's shine. The constant barrage of the wind, whispering condemnation, has very nearly stolen the life from the heart. Battered and abused from without and within, the heart is on the verge of giving up it's most precious treasure...hope itself.

 

 Far away, a bright and shining knight has heard the weeping of his lost love and rides to the rescue. He can remember the days gone by when he and his love could walk and talk with one another, communing with each other and sharing in the joy that came from that relationship. The gap that stood between them now wasn't built overnight. No, it came from weeks and months and years of falling away. He hadn't moved, but he found himself further and further separated as time wore on. Time has no bearing on the knight. He is timeless, changeless and ever so patient. He has waited to hear that cry and now, having heard, is on the move.

He has heard the cry of the heart and comes to it's aid. Light chases away the tangled dreams as a warm breeze scatters the morning mist at the start of a summer's day. Dark shadows, with no place to turn, evaporate and disappear when faced with the light. There is no darkness where this light shines. The wind, so strong and sharp before that it cut straight to the very core of the thing it struck, no longer had any strength. Scattering like so many cockroaches when the lights are turned on, the lies within it's vile breath seem so obvious now.

 

 Fear, worry and guilt find that they are powerless to stand against the knight. There's no real struggle or battle fought there. It would seem that that battle has already been fought, a victor proven and the outcome written in the history books to come. The guards can do no more than wilt before the knight in a silent acceptance of his power over them. The heart soon comes to realize that these guards were there at it's own invitation and acceptance. Anguished tears from countless years spent weeping over the belief that it was indeed a captive had only served to water the ground these guards grew in, their roots like tendrils that choked the very life from the heart itself. The knight knew that cutting the guards off at the base would only serve to allow them to grow back over time. No, the bitter roots would need to be pulled out and destroyed like so much chaff that is thrown into the fire.

The knight picks the battered heart, it's long lost love, up and begins to tenderly brush off the dirt and grime that has accumulated there for so long. He has waited for so very long to be re-united with his love. The heart, faced with the truth and once again filled with hope, knows that there is only one choice to make. It invites the knight into itself and the knight is all too willing to accept the invitation. This is what he has been waiting for. He joins with the heart and the heart begins to shine, each day shining brighter and brighter, not with a light of it's own but with the light provided from the knight himself. Others will say that they are able to see the knight when they look at the heart. The heart knows that no greater compliment can ever be heard.

 

 Another amazing thing happens after the dramatic rescue takes place. The knight gives to the heart a set of armor, as the heart realizes that while this battle is won the enemy is a resilient foe and, until the war is over, there will be other battles. Equipped with the armor of the knight, the heart has a chance, but only if the armor is worn daily.  The heart welcomes that battle, boldy wearing the armor given to it, because it knows the price that was paid in order to rescue it, a price paid out of the purest kind of love possible.

The heart continues that battle today. It has been set free from the bondage of it's past. It knows that it is good and it will remain forever grateful to the knight that saved it. One day when the war is over, it knows that it will be joined forever with it's knight in a new land where it will weep no more. Until then it will stand in the gap, wearing it's armor and armed with the truth that can set other hearts free.

Terry Rasner-Yacenda
Broker,Owner - Dreams Realty - Reno, NV
"Dreams Realty"
Hi Andrew -- you are an awesome writer.  Great story -- those who are ready will all go home to the Father one day, but until then we will put on the breastplate of armor and live boldly as Christians.  You and my husband, Dr. John, should share tales someday.  He has a book close to being published called "Tales of Senter Pond" which is a fictional tale of a young girl called to God's army from the early age of 12.
Jan 21, 2008 12:10 PM
Andrew Trevino
ADT Real Estate - Wilkes Barre, PA
Wilkes-Barre Homes For Sale

Terry,

You're too kind. Thanks for the comment. I guess it wasn't that great a story, since you were the only comment. LOL I enjoyed the writing of it, so I guess that's all that really counts, right?
I think I'd enjoy very much to have a conversation with Dr. John some day. Mine isn't the happiest of stories, but it's the only one I have. Let me know when his book is published and I will buy one for sure.

Jan 21, 2008 01:55 PM
Sondra Meyer:
EXP Realty, LLC - Corpus Christi, TX
See It. Experience It. Live It.

Andrew, I think I am historically a little slow at reading posts.  I agree 100% with Terry, you are an awesome writer.  Initially, I viewed it as an awesome love story that was accompanied by powerful pictures.   Even if you haven't had a 100 comments, know that posts like this are like the rare gems.  People walk by (or browse right by) not realizing what they are missing.  By the way, I've also noticed that some of the regular reader/members of this group have bee really busy this week. 

My initial thoughts as I was reading it was that this was the love story of you and your spouse because of the feelings behind it.   I found myself withing that I could find me a knight like that.  Then, when I saw where you had it posted, I started thinking and I was able to see it as the relationship between God and ourselves.  I've already got my knight.    Wow....  Personally, I'm glad to have stumbled across this jewel.  Grace and peace to you. 

Jan 24, 2008 03:43 PM
Jesse Clifton
Jesse Clifton & Associates - Fairbanks, AK
Wow, Andrew.  I'm almost speechless.  That is truly beautiful.  For once we've seen the light and have basked in its glorious warmth, darkness has forever lost its grip.  Keep writing.  With almost 68K members, it takes a while for some literary geniuses to rise to the top. 
Jan 24, 2008 08:53 PM
Hugh Krone
Weichert Referral Associates - Hamburg, NJ
Realtor, Sussex County NJ
Andrew, Sorry I must have missed you been a busy week with the trip to washington and all. as for your post two words come to ming.WOW and INTENSE.
Jan 24, 2008 11:15 PM
Andrew Trevino
ADT Real Estate - Wilkes Barre, PA
Wilkes-Barre Homes For Sale

Sondra,

I'm glad that you stumbled across this one then. This is the story of the male and female heart as much as it's the story of Jesus' relationship to us. The yearning in your heart for that knight is a yearning that's in the heart of all women, as is the desire in the hearts of men to come to the rescue of the fair maiden.

Jesus is your knight, your redeemer, and He loves you that much. Stick close to Him and the other desire of your heart for an earthly knight will be realized. Until then and always, God bless you!

Jan 25, 2008 12:05 AM
Andrew Trevino
ADT Real Estate - Wilkes Barre, PA
Wilkes-Barre Homes For Sale

Jesse and Kathy,

Thanks very much for your comment and welcome to my blog. I think this is the first time I've seen your name here. I'll keep writing if you keep reading. ;-)

God bless you!

Jan 25, 2008 12:08 AM
Andrew Trevino
ADT Real Estate - Wilkes Barre, PA
Wilkes-Barre Homes For Sale

Hugh,

It's been a very busy week for all of us, I think. Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you enjoyed it. God bless you!

Jan 25, 2008 12:09 AM
Alexander Harb
Knights Investing - Mesquite, TX
Dallas, Texas Real Estate Investing

Hmmm...my last name means,"Sword, War or Knight" in Lebanese......

I rescued my wife from a crappy existance...and now I will gladly do it again......

BOY, what a post!!

Thanks, Trev!!

\O/

Jan 25, 2008 08:03 AM
Andrew Trevino
ADT Real Estate - Wilkes Barre, PA
Wilkes-Barre Homes For Sale

Al,

You were just living from the heart God gave you. Don't stop doing that.

I'm pleased that you liked the post. God Bless you!!

Jan 25, 2008 11:07 AM
Jesse Clifton
Jesse Clifton & Associates - Fairbanks, AK
Sounds like a plan.  Consider me subscribed. I'll be back.  GBU!
Jan 25, 2008 03:23 PM