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Choosing the right words - Copyrighting for increased sales

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Real Estate Broker/Owner with Mission Grove Realty Inc.

Writing those ads and property descriptions gets harder and harder it seems. There are may good resources out there that can help and an LA Times article last week has motivated me to re-visit the issue.

The Dec 17th LA Times had a great article about the wording used in real estate ads. Everyone should take a minute to read it.  One that always impresses me is the "motivated seller". As if listing their property wasn't enough indication of their "motivation".

"For example, a Canadian professor, as part of a broader study on real estate sales patterns, found that homes where the seller was "motivated" actually took 15 percent longer to sell, while houses listed as "handyman specials" flew off the market in half the average time."(LA TIMES DEC 17th)

Words like: Quality, Value, Service, Caring and Integrity are said to be avoided like the plague in any type of advertising because of their over-use and potential, negative impact. Stating in an ad that you were a "caring Realtor with integrity" may make the reader question your motivation and need to state what would be presumed in the first place.

What words have you had great success with?

Any that you find to bring certain death to an ad?

"The Lovely Wife" The One And Only TLW.
President-Tutas Towne Realty, Inc. - Kissimmee, FL

We wish you a merry Christmas! We wish you a merry Christmas! We wish you a merry Christmas And a happy New Year! Glad tidings we bring To you and your kin! Glad tidings for Christmas And a happy New Year!

Broker Bryant and The Lovely Wife (pretend we are singing it works better like that) ROAR!

Dec 23, 2006 11:14 AM
Randy L. Prothero
eXp Realty - Hollister, MO
Missouri REALTOR, (808) 384-5645
I kind of crack up at the phrase motivated seller.  The others don't want to sell their homes?
Dec 23, 2006 04:56 PM
Christopher Walker
Mission Grove Realty Inc. - Hemet, CA
Local Broker and Realtor - Hemet & San Jacinto, CA

Randy:  I guess we all may have it wrong...... I think I will categorize all of my listings this year; 

  • Seller Motivated. Make an offer and we will get back to you quickly.
  • Seller kinda motivated. If you make and offer for more than the listed price, they might sell.
  • Seller does not want to sell, just testing waters. Please make an offer to show that I have it listed and let me know what you thought of their decorating.
  • Seller might sell but spouse wont. Need to have offer to show in divorce court.
  • Seller is thinking about selling. Make an offer and we might respond with a counter.
Dec 26, 2006 07:10 AM
Christopher Walker
Mission Grove Realty Inc. - Hemet, CA
Local Broker and Realtor - Hemet & San Jacinto, CA
TLW:  I have visualized the singing.... Needs a little work. Bryant was a bit off key.... Sounded a bit like something from 50 cent.  You did very well....Have you had voice lessons?
Dec 26, 2006 07:13 AM
"The Lovely Wife" The One And Only TLW.
President-Tutas Towne Realty, Inc. - Kissimmee, FL
You are very funny ya know. No lessons I just like to sing. :) TLW...ROAR!
Dec 26, 2006 07:38 AM
Christopher Walker
Mission Grove Realty Inc. - Hemet, CA
Local Broker and Realtor - Hemet & San Jacinto, CA

TLW: You are  an inspration to us all! Thanks for being here!:)

"iMAGINATION IS MORE IMPORTANT THAN KNOWLEGDE"

Dec 27, 2006 11:04 AM
"The Lovely Wife" The One And Only TLW.
President-Tutas Towne Realty, Inc. - Kissimmee, FL

WOW...That was very nice. I think I may have blushed when I read that. :)

Tell me, who said that? Save me some google time.

It is a great quote. Very appropriate as it relates to my posts. SVW. (smiling very wide)

TLW...ROAR!

Dec 27, 2006 11:53 AM
Christopher Walker
Mission Grove Realty Inc. - Hemet, CA
Local Broker and Realtor - Hemet & San Jacinto, CA

TLW:  Albert Einstein!

Another from him is "Art is the expression of the profoundest thoughts in the simplest ways".

There you have it....You, my lady, are an artist!

 

Have a great evening!

 

 

Dec 27, 2006 12:10 PM
"The Lovely Wife" The One And Only TLW.
President-Tutas Towne Realty, Inc. - Kissimmee, FL

I will. I just wanted to come back and Thank you. It's very good to know that my posts that are not about Real Estate are enjoyed by others. It's good for a lady to hear that once in awhile. :)

I should have known that was Einstein. It seems as if every quote that I really really like is by him. :)

I must bookmark this post. It will come in handy for these quotes and for moments when I am not feeling inspired. This will spark something out of me in moments like that.

Thanks so much for expressing your kind thoughts. :)

TLW...ROAR!

Dec 27, 2006 01:45 PM
Christopher Walker
Mission Grove Realty Inc. - Hemet, CA
Local Broker and Realtor - Hemet & San Jacinto, CA

TLW:  We love to hear you ROAR. Have a fantastic new year.

"May your walls know joy. May every room hold laughter, and every window open to great possibility"

Dec 28, 2006 06:27 AM
"The Lovely Wife" The One And Only TLW.
President-Tutas Towne Realty, Inc. - Kissimmee, FL

Excellent quote. I like that one too. I did think about the things you have said. I thought about it today and it set my art on fire. SVW...I have to thank you for that...TLW...ROAR!

SVW=Smiling Very Wide. Coined by Jeff Turner.

Dec 28, 2006 10:52 AM