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Once upon a time in Pichoura...

By
Real Estate Agent with Jameson Sotheby's International Realty

Prequel from here

Their parents quickly moved the threadbare Kilim rug from the center of the floor.. revealing the trap door to the root cellar located directly beneath the timber house. "Quick, down the ladder, stay down there... don't move, don't make a sound, no matter what you hear."

"But Abba, Eema... we want to stay and help you fight"

"You cannot help... get down there... now!"

Reluctantly, down they went, into the dark, dank cellar. among the fruits, roots and vegetables. The trap door closed with a dusty thump, and they could hear the rug shifting back into position, and then the sound of their parents, running around closing the home's wooden shutters, bolting the door.  The cacophony of noises out in the street was getting closer.  The Cossacks had arrived in town... most times they ran throughout the town, overturning flowerpots, scaring people, sometimes killing pets and occasionally harassing old timers. 

But today felt different. Recently one of the Cossack's own had been found dead down by the river... and they were coming for vengeance.  Abruptly the loudness broke into the quiet above them.... the shack shuddered with the pounding impact on the front door, and suddenly there were many angry footsteps above.  It sounded like a mob of people... And strangely, horses hooves. Down in the root cellar, Ari tried to jump to the ladder, and Moolie held him back.  What they heard above sounded violent...very violent. Muffled yelling, screaming, crying, and below it all, helplessness in the cellar. A moment, two moments, or perhaps thirty minutes... they huddled in the cellar, until in a slow instant, all went quiet.

They sat perfectly still, waiting for their parents to slide the rug away, and open the door, letting them know the coast was clear.  The rug never moved.  Finally, they crept up the ladder, and carefully opened the trapdoor... and peeked out.  What they saw in the one room shack was devastation.  Their parents were both dead...hacked to pieces... the meager furnishings were broken, damaged, shattered. The boys (and that's what they were.... "boys") stared in silence, tears streaming down their faces.

Noises in the street, roused them from their grief.  Others were grieving too.  Looking through the broken front door, they could see damaged homes throughout the shtetel.  Broken doors, damaged windows... the occasional shack afire.

"We can't stay here" Ari said.  "we have to leave... there's nothing left here for us... let's go".  Avoiding looking at the bloody bodies that used to be their parents, they gathered up a few belongings... a satchel... a knife, some wine, some bread, and a few bits of food from the cellar, and they were out the door.

"Where will we go, Moolie?" Ari asked tentatively.

"We'll head for the port" Moolie answered, "it's time to leave mother Russia".... They opened the front door, and stepped out into the world, and made their way to the edge of town.

(continued here)

Posted by

 ALAN MAY, Realtor®   
Specializing in Evanston Real Estate and North Shore Real Estate

Jameson Sotheby's International Realty, 2934 Central Street, Evanston, IL 60201
Office: 847.869.7300      Cell: 847.924.3313      Email: Almay@aol.com

Evanston Real Estate & North Shore Real Estate
Licensed in Illinois

   

Comments(10)

Larry Bettag
Cherry Creek Mortgage Illinois Residential Mortgage License LMB #0005759 Cherry Creek Mortgage NMLS #: 3001 - Saint Charles, IL
Vice-President of National Production

Kudos on 400,000 points Alan.....It's about time.  Now for you to take over the #2 spot homeboy!

Sep 10, 2010 09:28 AM
Jason Sardi
Auto & Home & Life Insurance throughout North Carolina - Charlotte, NC
Your Agent for Life

I like that you are doing this, May.  I'm going to have to read the series (and subsequently) follow it when I get home later.  You've got talent, my friend.

 

Sep 10, 2010 09:46 AM
Susan Mangigian
RE/MAX Preferred - West Chester, PA
Chester & Delaware County Homes, Delaware and Ches

This is really wonderful.  xxoo

Sep 10, 2010 10:40 AM
Alan May
Jameson Sotheby's International Realty - Evanston, IL
Home is where the hearth is.

Larry - Lookout Mr. Harb... I'm on your six.

Jason - you know, sometimes, it just has to come out.

Susan - you are sooooooo good for my ego.

Sep 10, 2010 11:05 AM
Larry Story ALC
Total Care Realty - Greensboro, NC
Beneath it all is the Land, Covering all of NC

Alan,

I am constantly checking to see when the next installment is.  You do need to put into book form.  I will buy a copy. 

Sep 10, 2010 04:18 PM
Alan May
Jameson Sotheby's International Realty - Evanston, IL
Home is where the hearth is.

Larry - I ain't writ it all yet.

Sep 10, 2010 05:26 PM
Lisa Orme
The Master's Key Realty LLC -Windsor, CT - HARTFORD COUNTY - Windsor, CT
Broker/Realtor, ABR, CRS,GRI, PSCS, SFR, Notary Pu

Well just make sure you keep working on it!  It's wonderful!

Sep 11, 2010 05:02 AM
Alan May
Jameson Sotheby's International Realty - Evanston, IL
Home is where the hearth is.

Lisa - I'll do that.  Glad you're enjoying it.

Sep 11, 2010 05:25 AM
Jack Mossman - The Nines Team at Keller Williams in Stockton
The Nines Team At Keller Williams - Stockton, CA
The Nines Team at Keller Williams in Stockton

Alan - I do this with Netflix too ... I get the whole season of a program at one time .... but I think that I'm missings some of the anticipation ... so I'll soon be caught up ... and will just have to wait like everyone else ...  great job ... entertaining .... strong messaging!

Sep 11, 2010 12:13 PM
Alan May
Jameson Sotheby's International Realty - Evanston, IL
Home is where the hearth is.

Jack - thank you, and thanks for following along.

Sep 11, 2010 12:46 PM