Found in the local real estate flyer this week: A very nice office building for sale - with very lame photos and descriptions.
I think perhaps this needs a re-write:
"Vaulted well lite ceilings in both office spaces with wood tongue and groove covering."
They didn't really need that description because the ad included a photo of the ceiling - showing the varnished tongue and groove finish and recessed can lights. It also included 2 photos of blank walls, each with a window and a short description saying the rooms were spacious.
To be fair, yes there was a nice photo of the exterior.
But darn. It would be so easy to re-write that sentence. And it would be so easy to include the dimensions of the conference room and reception area. "Spacious" really doesn't say much.
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