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Be careful! Overused trigger words can turn into stop signs

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Services for Real Estate Pros with Marte Cliff Copywriting

You’ve probably read the lists of trigger words to use in headlines – words and phrases that have stood the test of time and still make people open envelopes or click on links.

Those include words like “free, secret, how to, why, announcing, introducing, discover, breakthrough, new,” and many more. Along with those are question headlines and “7 ways to…”

Lately there have been some new entries to the list, but I doubt they’ll stand the test of time.

For a while, instead of “7 ways to…” it was “7 hacks that will…” I really dislike that term man with jaw droppingso won’t open an email with that headline. (Just a silly, stubborn thing of mine.)

Then along came “Jaw dropping.” My email inbox was filled day after day with jaw dropping news and its variations: “This will make your jaw drop!” “Her jaw dropped when she learned…”

There should have been jaws on the ground all over the country.

Today its “____said one shocking thing that ________” or “________did one thing.”

And then there are the headlines that scream about the “one thing” you must never eat, never say, or never do. (And they never tell. You have to buy the book to find out.)

I believe serious marketers should avoid these "new triggers."

I don’t know if “hacks” will last (I hope not) but I think dropping jaws and “one things” will fall by the wayside. Right now I wouldn’t consider using any of them in a headline, because I’m afraid it would backfire.

Why?

Because those headlines so often lead to non-news. They either don’t deliver at all, the news is stale, or it’s just gossip with no foundation.

I think the writers who are using them are inadvertently conditioning people to think “There’s nothing interesting there,” and just move on. I know it works that way for me.

How about you? Do you still click to read about “one things” and jaws dropping?

 

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Comments(9)

Dorie Dillard Austin TX
Coldwell Banker Realty ~ 512.750.6899 - Austin, TX
NW Austin ~ Canyon Creek and Spicewood/Balcones

Good evening Marte Cliff ,

Never! I don't have time for these revolutionary products or gimmicks and block any one of them that comes in.

Sep 24, 2019 05:55 PM
Kathy Streib
Cypress, TX
Home Stager/Redesign

Marte- soon, if not already, we become numb to these words. I have a feeling that "hack" may have to be added to the most overused word in the last 5 years. 

Sep 24, 2019 06:50 PM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Dorie Dillard CRS GRI ABR I opened a few of those emails before I realized they all led to nothing... now I just delete them.

Kathy Streib It certainly seems that way. I don't know why that word irritates me, but it does. Meanwhile, the old stand-by words keep right on chugging along, attracting readers.

Maybe it's our age - perhaps the millenials ignore the old words and respond to the new ones?

Sep 24, 2019 07:28 PM
Anna "Banana" Kruchten
HomeSmart Real Estate - Phoenix, AZ
602-380-4886

Hi Marte Cliff these are so fake. Nothing genuine about these 'headline catchers' (or so they think). Whenever I hear any of them, especially from the main stream media I just laugh. They all use the same 'blockbuster' whatever!!

Sep 25, 2019 03:44 PM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Anna Banana Kruchten - Phoenix Homes Sales I lost count of how many were in today's email.

The one thing you should never feed your dog.

The one thing you can eat that will melt belly fat.

The one thing that will cure arthritis.

The one thing so-and-so said that will destroy Trump (or Peloi, or Biden, or ...).

And on and on and on. I delete all of them.

Sep 25, 2019 08:45 PM
Diana Dahlberg
1 Month Realty - Pleasant Prairie, WI
Real Estate in Kenosha, WI since 1994 262-308-3563

I may have fallen one or two times ... but from then on ... I pass

Sep 28, 2019 10:30 AM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Diana Dahlberg - The same for me. The headlines look interesting, but it only takes a couple of times to realize they're fake. Too bad - some of them might be real.

Sep 28, 2019 10:44 AM
Diana Dahlberg

I agree. But then they will just need to use a different strategy! 

Sep 28, 2019 12:29 PM
M.C. Dwyer
Melody Russell Team at eXp Realty of California, Inc. - Felton, CA
MC Dwyer-Santa Cruz Mountains Property Specialist

Thanks for the laughs, Marte.   Nope I'd never use "hack," "one thing," nor "jaw dropping."    Too far over the top for my style!

Sep 29, 2019 09:38 AM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

I'm with you, M.C. Dwyer - they're all too "hypey" for me. But the SURE are overused! Either some people respond to them, or the writers are delusional.

Sep 29, 2019 01:58 PM