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Revitalize your marketing - a challenge

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Services for Real Estate Pros with Marte Cliff Copywriting

Have you noticed that the people who do the most - for customers, clients, and even friends - are often the last to notice their own efforts?

I find this to be common with my Realtor clients.

When they hire me to write letters, web copy, or an agent bio I ask them to fill out a questionnaire. Two of my questions are:  

  •         What special or added services do you offer to buyers and sellers?
  •         What do you do better than your competition?

Quite often, they can't tell me.stand out in your real estate market

In fact, some even tell me there's nothing different about their service. They swear that they do the same things everyone else does.

I know better.

For one thing, they wouldn't be bothering to hire a copywriter if they weren't a cut above the rest. They'd be sitting at their desks playing video games or hanging out in the break room, whining about no customers.

So... sometimes my challenge is to drag that information out of them, one little chunk at a time.

If you haven't figured out what makes you special - and if you aren't using it in your marketing, then I issue you this challenge:

First, take a few hours away from everyone - find a spot where you can be quiet and think. Take a notepad with you.

Now, envision what you do for each buyer - no matter how trivial you think those things are. Write them all down in a long list. Believe me, if you really think about all the things you believe are small and unimportant the list will be long.

Then do the same for sellers. Mentally walk through your day and notice the things you do. Put them on the list.

Then stop and remember comments clients have made to you - or testimonials they have written. My guess is you'll find some of those small, unimportant (to you) tasks included in their thanks.

Compare what you do to what others do...

Think about the last few closings you did that involved another agent on the other side of the transaction. Did you do part of that agent's work? Did you catch her in a small falsehood or two? Did he return your phone calls promptly - or make you wait for needed information?

Take a new sheet of paper and write down all the things you saw those agents NOT doing.

Next take a mental look around your office. See that agent over there shopping on eBay? See the guy wandering around bothering everyone who is trying to work? See the pair in the break room discussing last night's TV shows?

Don't you think you're doing some things that they aren't doing?

testimonials keyIt's too bad, but those "not doing" agents make up 80% of the people "working" in real estate. (Just like they make up 80% of the people "working" in every other field.)

That's why your service is better - and why customers and clients NEED you!

Don't be afraid to use some of the things you think of as routine in your marketing - because they aren't routine to buyers and sellers who have worked with anyone in that 80%.

In case you hadn't heard – legendary copywriter Claude Hopkins raised Schlitz beer from obscure to #2 in the country, just by talking about a process that every beer manufacturer in the country was also using. They didn't mention their process, because everyone did it - but once he had said it about Schlitz, anyone else who tried to join in just looked like a copycat.

Mentioning the little things you do for customers and clients also helps them see why you are worth every penny it costs to have your help - and I doubt if there's an agent who has worked for more than 6 months who hasn't had a client try to negotiate the commission down simply because they couldn't see what the agent did that could be worth "so much."

You can create a web page entitled "What you can expect from me when I list your home," or you can mention the bits and pieces as you go through a listing presentation. Then you can do something similar for buyer prospects.returning emails promptly

Surely you realize how many buyers have been "hung out to dry" by an agent who insisted they sign a buyer agency agreement and then left it up to the buyers to find homes to view. Your marketing can assure them that you'll be the one searching for their perfect home.

You also have to know how many agents fail to return messages. Make a promise to return calls, emails, and text messages within X number of hours - and then, of course, keep the promise.

Look at what you do - compare it to the 80% -  let yourself feel a bit of pride - and then use it in your marketing! 

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Comments(50)

Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Thanks Endre Barath, Jr. I appreciate your kind words. 

Jan 17, 2016 05:48 AM
Laura Filip
Laura Filip Broker , Opening doors for All Seasons of Life - Whitesboro, TX
What can we do for you today?

Great post and thank you for sharing what sets us apart from othes hmmm seems I need to take that alone time and write it down. 

Jan 17, 2016 07:07 AM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Laura Filip RE/MAX UTOPIA | 903-271-4978 Yes, it's a good idea to give that some quiet contemplation. You are no doubt better than you think you are! 

Jan 17, 2016 08:33 AM
Laura Filip
Laura Filip Broker , Opening doors for All Seasons of Life - Whitesboro, TX
What can we do for you today?

Marte Cliff can you tell me more about what it is that you do to help real estate agents and brokers please. 

Jan 17, 2016 08:40 AM
Ryan Huggins - Thousand Oaks, CA
https://HugginsHomes.com - Thousand Oaks, CA
Residential Real Estate and Investment Properties

Great points Marte.  I really need to step back and make sure I articulate what I do that others don't.

Jan 17, 2016 09:48 AM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Laura Filip RE/MAX UTOPIA | 903-271-4978 I write whatever words you need to promote yourself and your business - and sometimes I the words agents need to promote individual listings. In other words:  I write anything from an agent bio, to a personal brochure, to a series of letters, to all the copy for a website. For some clients, I even write individual emails to specific clients. 

 

Jan 17, 2016 10:19 AM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Ryan Huggins - Thousand Oaks, CA Yes, do take the time to think about that. 

Jan 17, 2016 10:20 AM
Claude Labbe
RLAH / @properties - Washington, DC
Realty for Your Busy Life

Most people can't respond to this challenge, they can't figure out how they are different, much less better.

Yes...as I am driving tomorrow, surely I'll be working through some of this myself, just to ensue my own set of notes on myself is the 2016 version, not the 2012 version of me.

Jan 17, 2016 01:29 PM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Claude Labbe We do tend to keep evolving from year to year, don't we? 

Jan 17, 2016 02:45 PM
Shannon Milligan, Richmond VA Real Estate Agent/Associate Broker
RVA Home Team - Richmond, VA
RVA Home Team - Winning with Integrity.

You know, I think I have a pretty good idea how I am different BUT I have a hard time fitting that into a message for marketing. 

Jan 17, 2016 10:43 PM
Nina Hollander, Broker
Coldwell Banker Realty - Charlotte, NC
Your Greater Charlotte Realtor

Great post, Marte. So many things we do that we assume everyone else does, but they don't. It is about adding value to our clients' experiences with us. I've used a document for years called "Value Added Services From..." that summarize my marketing services for sellers.

Jan 18, 2016 12:15 AM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Shannon Milligan, Richmond VA Real Estate Agent/Associate Broker It isn't easy, and it does take time to get a message just right - but it's worth the effort.

Nina Hollander It's easy to make that assumption, especially if you generally associate with other agents who also take good care of their clients. You can forget that there are those who do as little as possible. 

Jan 18, 2016 01:07 AM
Nina Hollander, Broker

That's so true, Marte. I service my clients in a certain way and assume everyone is as well. So when a client says "wow" I'm always a bit surprised because my level of service is my norm.

Jan 18, 2016 01:26 AM
Praful Thakkar
LAER Realty Partners - Burlington, MA
Metro Boston Homes For Sale

Marte Cliff I used to think Blogging is not a big deal! Looking at my market, there are very few who shares market reports like I do! It shows I have much better knowledge about the market - simple.

However, I never played that card - so I'd like to thank you for teaching me how to show my unique selling proposition (USP) and what I consider to be 'routine' is not-so-routine.

Always something to learn in your posts! Love that.

Jan 18, 2016 01:26 PM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Thank you Praful Thakkar. It makes me feel good to think that I am helping in some small way. 

I look at what you and others are doing here on Active Rain and I wonder why on earth there is not one agent in my small town who is following your lead. If one agent started blogging about the community and started posting market reports, they'd probably completely dominate the market. 

Jan 18, 2016 01:55 PM
Joe Petrowsky
Mortgage Consultant, Right Trac Financial Group, Inc. NMLS # 2709 - Manchester, CT
Your Mortgage Consultant for Life

Good morning Marte. I am fortunate to get lots of testimonials, it helps from a credibility stand point. Great job with your post, you are so right.

Jan 18, 2016 07:32 PM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Joe Petrowsky You are fortunate to have clients who take the time to write a testimonial. I'm sure it's your superior service that gives them that motivation! 

Jan 19, 2016 03:53 AM
Pamela Cendejas
Second Self Virtual Assistance - Kingman, AZ
Second Self Virtual Assistance (928) 692-3235

Such good tips, Marte Cliff .  Having a questionaire for agents to complete is a great idea.

Jan 21, 2016 05:21 AM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Pamela Cendejas Most of my questions are easy, but agents have a hard time with those two. 

Jan 21, 2016 05:32 AM
Wayne Zuhl
Remax First Realty II - Cranford, NJ
The Last Name You'll Ever Need in Real Estate

Hi Marte,

This is a fantastic post!  Thank you so uch for sharing.  Sometimes we really need to think about what makes us stand out.  

Jan 21, 2016 06:09 AM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Wayne and Jean Marie Zuhl Yes - you do! And then you need to make sure your prospects know it too. 

Jan 21, 2016 08:00 AM