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Your First Real Estate Prospecting Letter

By
Services for Real Estate Pros with Marte Cliff Copywriting

If you’re a new real estate agent, your broker or manager has probably told you to contact your sphere of influence and let them know that you’re now an agent.

Your first thought might be “My sphere of influence? I don’t have any influence!” I know that’s what I connect with your spherethought the first time I heard it.

All it means is the people who know and like you. That includes family, friends, business acquaintances, people you know from meetings you attend, fellow volunteers, your spouse’s friends, your parents’ friends, your hairdresser, your mechanic, your dog groomer, and of course past clients from some other career.

The next question – what do you say to them?

A few days ago I followed a search link and saw some advice that I thought was terrible. The writer recommended saying "I'm an agent now and I need your help."

In my opinion, calling or writing to say you’re now an agent and you want their business is a bit tacky, not to mention pushy. In addition, it might backfire and cause them to never call on you. So take a different approach. Let them know that this is good news for them as well as for you.

As with all real estate letters, do NOT begin your message with the word “I.” Instead, make it about the reader.

Still not sure how to write it? Here’s a sample:

Dear (friend, client from a former business, former boss, etc.)

Good news! You now have a friend in real estate – someone you can call with questions who won’t begin bombarding you with marketing messages.

As a member of the (name) Multiple Listing Service, I now have access to information about homes for sale and sold, average prices, and market trends in (name the area your MLS covers). So whether you’re curious about the selling price of a home down the street or simply wonder if prices are up or down in your neighborhood, just get in touch. I’ll be happy to do the research and get back to you quickly.

Of course, if you do happen to be in need of an agent to help you purchase or sell a home, I’d love to be that agent.  And, if you have a friend or acquaintance in need of a real estate professional, I’d appreciate the referral.

You can count on me to provide up-to-date information, honest answers, dependable communication, and total support – and I promise not to be pushy.

Add your signature and contact information – including your location.

………………………..

After you’ve sent the initial letter, be sure to stay in touch periodically. If you write a market report or a real estate newsletter, write them and ask if they’d like a copy now and further updates as you write them – and ask if they’d like it via email, because communicating that way will save you money.

The main thing is not to let them forget that you’re an agent and you’re there to help them.

If you don’t know what to write, use my Event Themed Keeping in Touch Letters. They’re a light-hearted, non-pushy way to stay in front of people. They also might get your name introduced to new people, because some of those letters contain the kind of information that people enjoy sharing over coffee or cocktails.

Once you begin making sales, add each of those clients to your database – in a different folder, so you can keep past clients and your sphere separate. Enter pertinent information, so you can send Happy Anniversary messages on the date that their new home closed, send a birthday card, or simply remember their children’s or their pets’ names. The more personal attention you give, the more they’ll like and remember you.

You’ve chosen an exciting and demanding career – and you’ll succeed if you work hard, learn all you can, and show people that they mean more to you than a commission check.

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This post first appeared at https://copybymarte.com/your-first-real-estate-prospecting-letter/

Comments(11)

Nina Hollander, Broker
Coldwell Banker Realty - Charlotte, NC
Your Greater Charlotte Realtor

Now that is a good introductory letter, Marte. Wish I could use it... but after 25 years it would look odd! 

Mar 16, 2018 11:51 AM
Marte Cliff

Yes it would, Nina Hollander - although I suppose you could write something along the lines of "After 25 years, I'm still here for you."

Mar 16, 2018 12:21 PM
Robert Vegas Bob Swetz
Las Vegas, NV

Hello Marte, love the letter and your post has been featured to the group:

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Mar 16, 2018 03:06 PM
Marte Cliff

Thank you Robert Vegas Bob Swetz - as always, I appreciate your support!

Mar 16, 2018 04:53 PM
Carol Williams
Although I'm retired, I love sharing my knowledge and learning from other real estate industry professionals. - Wenatchee, WA
Retired Agent / Broker / Prop. Mgr, Wenatchee, WA

Hi Marte,
I always love your approach! 

Mar 16, 2018 05:45 PM
Marte Cliff

Thanks Carol Williams.

Mar 16, 2018 08:28 PM
Pat Starnes-Front Gate Realty
Front Gate Real Estate - Brandon, MS
601-991-2900 Office; 601-278-4513 Cell

I like this approach, Marte. It's helpful to the recipient and offers them something of value, INFORMATION. And, it could still work if revised for those of us who have been in the trenches for a while, if farming a neighborhood.

Mar 16, 2018 07:57 PM
Marte Cliff

Thanks Pat Starnes, Brandon, MS - yes, it could be revised. The main thing is to make it about value to the reader

Mar 16, 2018 08:30 PM
Susan McCall - - Compass Realty Solutions
Compass Realty Solutions - Portland, OR
Listing and Buyer's Agent

Love your ideas and thanks for the inspiration.

Mar 16, 2018 11:57 PM
Marte Cliff

Thanks Susan McCall, Everyone needs a home - I'm aways happy to inspire!

Mar 17, 2018 12:02 AM
Debb Janes
Nature As Neighbors - Camas, WA
Put My Love of Nature At Work for You

Very nice. It has success written all over it.  It's so great to get off on the right foot - this letter would do it. D 

Mar 17, 2018 07:06 AM
Marte Cliff

Thanks Debb Janes EcoBroker and Bernie Stea JD. I think the right way to start is to become an asset to people - not a beggar.

Mar 17, 2018 07:49 AM
Ron Aguilar
Gateway Mortgage Group - Saint George, UT
Mortgage & Real Estate Advisor since 1995

Verye good information here for all. Since some agents have been in the biz for awhile, maybe we can call it "A Prospecting Letter." Either way staying top of mind with your list is important. Finally, the art of copywriting is helpful too.

Mar 17, 2018 03:34 PM
Marte Cliff

Thanks Ron Aguilar - yes, I think you could change it up a bit and use it even if you're not new.

Mar 17, 2018 04:15 PM
Laura Cerrano
Feng Shui Manhattan Long Island - Locust Valley, NY
Certified Feng Shui Expert, Speaker & Researcher

There’s a first time for everything and that is one of the good ones to to tray you so much about that world

Mar 17, 2018 09:15 PM
Marte Cliff

Yes, Laura Cerrano - everyone needs to start somewhere.

Mar 18, 2018 09:09 AM
Mary Hutchison, SRES, ABR
Better Homes and Gardens Real Estate-Kansas City Homes - Kansas City, MO
Experienced Agent in Kansas City Metro area

Excellent blog and I'm going to share it with some new agents in my office!

Mar 18, 2018 08:05 AM
Marte Cliff

Thanks Mary Hutchison, SRES, ABR - I hope it helps them!

Mar 18, 2018 09:09 AM
Thomas McCombs
Century 21 HomeStar - Akron, OH

Another excellent post. I have often felt that emails that are being promoted for you to send to your sphere by the Brokerages are to "Spamish", while yours is not.

Mar 18, 2018 04:19 PM
Marte Cliff

Why do they do that, Thomas McCombs? You'd think that a brokerage, and especially a national franchise, could hire a copywriter with some training and some savvy about psychology. 


When I see people promoting letters that begin with "Dear Joe, I want..." it makes me cringe.


 

Mar 18, 2018 04:24 PM
Jan Green - Scottsdale, AZ
Value Added Service, 602-620-2699 - Scottsdale, AZ
HomeSmart Elite Group, REALTOR®, EcoBroker, GREEN

Excellent letter, of course, Marte!  Knowing what to say as a new agent is never easy, but your letter is perfect introduction! 

Mar 18, 2018 09:41 PM
Marte Cliff

Jan Green - I think it's all about mind-set for those new agents. If they think of themselves as needy, they'll be needy. It's better to think of themselves as providing a valuable service - and then they'll become valuable.

Mar 19, 2018 07:53 AM